Dear Sanjay,
I really liked your monologue on Dill. Your interpretation of Dill was how I imagined him. However, at certain points in your monologue it was difficult to understand you. I liked how you used facial expressions to emphasize what you were saying. What was it about Dill that made you want to pick him for your monologue?
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Dear Sanjay,
I really liked your monologue on Dill. Your interpretation of Dill was how I imagined him. However, at certain points in your monologue it was difficult to understand you. I liked how you used facial expressions to emphasize what you were saying. What was it about Dill that made you want to pick him for your monologue?
Good job,
Max
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