The Move by Madeline

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3 thoughts on “The Move by Madeline

  1. I like how I get to see how you reacted when you found out you were moving. I also liked how it was sort of open ended. You are also a good artist.

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  2. I liked how neat your story was. Your story was easy to follow without being to simple. Your tittle fits the story without giving everything away. GOOD job!

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